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Thu, Jul. 28th, 2016 | 11:23 pm  slavezombie


Something I left out when I began to tackle tmtwngm's act one. Oops
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Time for another re-write of page 1-3. I know I said that"s why I don"t like writing using computer, but wcis. I"m blocked. Nothing else to do.
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Thu, Jul. 28th, 2016 | 11:18 pm  slavezombie


with my luck, a vote cast for Jill Stein might turn into a win. what a deal.
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political revolution has Americans casting their votes for either the winner or the loser.


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Sun, Jul. 24th, 2016 | 12:30 pm  slavezombie


I don't like the Selectric. It keeps jamming. Sometimes when I type a hyphen, sometimes a period.
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chaos setup


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Sun, Jul. 24th, 2016 | 12:26 pm  slavezombie


building ACT ONE so that it will carry ACT TWO is not so easy. I still haven't touched on conspiracy
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The calm before the storm
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Fri, Jul. 22nd, 2016 | 09:36 pm  ‏‏␦ confused ♬ Space Age Love Song - A FLOCK OF SEAGULLS slavezombie


Walnut ink notes
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On the scenes at the KFC between MOLLY and drive thru window CLERK

No conflict in setup for MOLLY's breakdown. This could mean that BIER'S demise happens between the encounter with ELLE and the tantrum at the drive thru.

On the LOONEY TUNES parody/computer saver

I think what you're trying to say is the process of production of e-zines using silk screen printing.

-USED- See animation of EVIL OTTO sequence in ACT ONE.

On the sequence where AARON smokes in the break room because he's expecting MOLLY to bring KFC which can mask the smell of anything.

NOTE: find index card for this sequence. Reposition to ACT THREE.

On the dialog revealing BLYTHE INDIAN INTAGLIO as setup for rooftop jungles and smiley faces

July 18, 2016 Needs more conflict. Setup for smiley faces in blood scene and it's connection to rooftop jungles needs stronger links. As a matter of fact, I cannot see how or where the setup for painting addresses on rooftops is going to come in. Hint: typing the stalking HS scenes w/ computer technology might be worth researching instead of showing MC infatuation w/ an average looking girl.

On the gross effects killing flies has on BIER's friends

Why? was it-- is it as to function as some sort of reminder to do something significant with the Arnold de Torroja character.~

GUILLEMETTE -12.

On sequence introducing ELLE's character to BIER at the e-zine publishing firm where he works

Basically you have to ask yourself why these scenes aren't already in the rewrite TMTWNGM (page 5ish). Find index card. Reposition.
BIER looks up to see that the group of women have wandered off.
BIER tenses up at the sound of her name. He begins to use every opportunity he can to sneak a glancer at her-- FLASHBACK High school, etc. END FLASHBACK … measuring her. But now he can't find her. He discreetly looks up in between the paper shuffling, makes a thorough scan about his locale, then gives up. He has a customer. Shocked, he puts on his glasses.

ELLE's POV would be that the slight tint in the lenses made it look as if BIER was trying to disguise himself

BIER makes observations without leading on to the fact that he recognizes ELLE. He analyzes her nose, her hands, her fingers, her hair, her eyes, her height. All the while, looking as natural and robotic as he can.

On the scenarios of DEIRDRE being the editor who selected ELLE as the "spotlight" sorta researcher

I think this whole sequence should be done in silence to reflect BIER/PETE's POV. I mean, it doesn't matter that a line of dialog transpires, but no sound. (i.e. As if the only thing missing is the music PETE/BIER is known to have in his head. Emphasize this to reflect growth.)

In ELLE's mind, PETE always was fond of METAL but in BIER's mind, it wasn't until this chink in fate, their lives crossing after 30-some years, that caused BIER to appreciate METAL so much more.


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Thu, Jul. 21st, 2016 | 01:45 pm  ♬ Chiklets - PATTI SMITH slavezombie


OMG, FB, sharing will never be the same
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Thu, Jul. 21st, 2016 | 01:22 pm  slavezombie


pdf version
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Thu, Jul. 21st, 2016 | 10:40 am  slavezombie


links for next article on newspaper design
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Tue, Jul. 19th, 2016 | 08:18 pm  slavezombie


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"tis the season, at my house, when flies creep into my house thru the chimney.


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Mon, Jul. 18th, 2016 | 10:53 pm  slavezombie


This matters becuz i feed the birds during wyntir
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Researchers find more aggressive behavior in city birds than rural ones http://vtnews.vt.edu/articles/2016/07/071116-fralin-citybirds.html#.V42_89i_M9I.twitter


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Mon, Jul. 11th, 2016 | 11:09 pm  slavezombie


Twit2LJ Monthly Digest for June 2016
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32 Tweets - 17 DaysCollapse )

Twittolj didn't update this month. I'm usually good at keeping up with these things. There's so many apps now, it's hard to keep track of what's doing what; no wonder my phone is slowing down.


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Mon, Jul. 11th, 2016 | 08:49 pm  ♬ The letter - NATALIE MERCHANT slavezombie


And with this, I will slowly abstract the plot to include the Weisenthal Youth
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LC brown noses her way up band class

Getting use to enormous databank I created with so much junk I accumulated in the highschool series.


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Sun, Jun. 26th, 2016 | 04:38 pm  slavezombie


5 Mysterious Events Caught On Camera & Spotted In Real Life!
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Thu, Jun. 16th, 2016 | 10:10 am  slavezombie


evil otto
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Wed, Jun. 8th, 2016 | 07:55 pm  slavezombie


Sequence containing fly, evil otto, heavy metal music, and LC
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reincarnation theory in which bier & elle are these people from a 1950"s clip
reincarnation theory in which bier & elle are these people from a 1950"s clip
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Fri, Jun. 3rd, 2016 | 12:07 pm  slavezombie


how to scan ur scenes
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Five apps for scanning documents on your iPhone - CNET
http://www.cnet.com/how-to/five-apps-for-scanning-documents-on-your-iphone/

Five apps for scanning documents on your iPhone

Whether you're in school or running a business, being able to scan documents on the go can be extremely useful. Here are five apps that make it easy.


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Wed, Jun. 1st, 2016 | 06:43 pm  slavezombie


This probably exhausts my resources in the attempt to access original footage from the music video
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Johnnie Ray - WOW.com
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Archival footage of Ray arriving at London Heathrow Airport in 1954 was featured in the 1982 music video for Dexys Midnight Runners' single "Come On Eileen".

Roberts, David (2006). British Hit Singles & Albums (19th ed.). London: Guinness World Records Limited. p. 523. ISBN 1-904994-10-5.


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Wed, Jun. 1st, 2016 | 06:28 pm  slavezombie


from "ur screenplay is not ur penis"
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Like many of you, I could barely get through it, and later had to have my anal sphincter surgically removed from my stomach after it had made the long crawl through my bowels and intestines in an attempt to hide from the mortification witnessed on the page.
http://www.singlescreenwriter.com/2014/04/your-screenplay-is-not-your-penis.html?utmsource=feedburner&utmmedium=feed&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+TheSingleScreenwriter+%28The+Single+Screenwriter%29

Like many of you, I could barely get through it, and later had to have my anal sphincter surgically removed from my stomach after it had made the long crawl through my bowels and intestines in an attempt to hide from the mortification witnessed on the page.


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Tue, May. 31st, 2016 | 11:42 pm  ‏‏␦ anxious slavezombie


TMTWNGM
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hopeless romantic finds a niche
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Thu, May. 26th, 2016 | 09:37 pm  ♬ Dead skin mask - SLAYER slavezombie


Provokimg images
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Slavezombie score. "spaz"

As I start the process of putting things together in my head, about life, relationships, and the stuff that makes me mad, I'm pondering exploring recording the progress I'm making with the guitar. I wanted to write more, as my head is exploring with newer ways to view music theory from a HEAVY METAL perspective. I've been listening to other stuff as I bounce back and forth from writing and attributing every little thing I get from the books I'm reading, the research on bizarre incidences and all the stuff that I find fascinating, but all this stuff can't belong to the protagonist; so I'm going to try to assign them character building scenes in the workshop.

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